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Fabyan Bermudez  
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#1 | Posted: 7 Oct 2011 20:18
Broken Record by me.

Sorrow glimmer in your in eyes
Behind that smile, a disguise
Inside you're suffering
Never met a soul so broken
Impossible to deny you pity
I tried telling you what to do
But complaining is all you do

My words failed getting through you
Been skipping like broken record
I don't have anything more to offer
You keep letting yourself become a victim
Trapped inside your own prison
Your heart constantly beaten
But on becoming your beacon, I persist

For the sake of our friendship
Abandoning you I resist
Even when your excuses are ********
I keep on skipping like a broken record
Hoping one day you'll open your eyes
Hoping soon you'll become wise
Till then I'll remain by your side
The Concerned Conservative  
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#2 | Posted: 5 Nov 2011 17:43
Is this a rap song?
 
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