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What do you think of these lyrics? Need help !

 
Hanan  
Forums Member
#1 | Posted: 12 Nov 2011 11:00
STAY STRONG BY HANAN ALI
Just a guy with scruffy hair
is a player
but in he's head,
he's insercure and just wants somebody to love
well i say

stay strong, stay strongg
and she'll come running
when the time comes
because fate's always playing a difficult game
doesn't come when you want it
stay strong, strong
i say stay stronggg

theres always rules,
things that you got to do
specific rules
like always get the girl , that doesn't care about anybody else but her
because baby , thats what you do when your a player
aint got feelings, but with you ,
its just a game
where there's no winner
but if i was you, i'd say

stay strong, stay strongg
and she'll come running
when the time comes
because fate's always playing a difficult game
doesnt come when you want it
stay strong, strong

i say stay strongg
stay strong, stay strongg
and she'll come running
when the time comes
because fate's always playing a difficult game
doesnt come when you want it
stay strong, strong
i say stay stronggg.
Ameirah Female  
Forums Member
#2 | Posted: 14 Nov 2011 03:59
HI Hanan,

You might have better lucking posting in the Songwriting Collaboration Request section.

The lounge is for lounging and may be overlooked by people wanting to collaborate.

Cheers

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