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JAKE.  
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#1 | Posted: 25 Dec 2013 15:19
I can almost feel your dent in the bed still
I can smell your perfume in the air
I can feel your hair run through my fingers
I thought I'd let you know
Even though I know you don't care

I can almost feel your grooves in the floor now
We both agreed your dancing was the worse
I can still feel you wrapped in my arms
I thought I'd let you know for what it's worth

Chorus:
Why can't I move on from you?
I just don't know what to do
Just don't know what to do
If that is a past life
Why must I relive it?
Maybe I'm so livid
Because these memories are vivid
You're vivid

I can still hear your heart beating softly
I used to count the ticks to pass the time
I can still taste your skin on my lips
I thought I'd let you know
Hope I'm not out of line

I can still hear you swearing at me
I can still see you crying tears
I can still feel the bridge I burned down
I thought I'd let you know
Losing you was my biggest fear

Chorus

Every time I close my eyes
I don't get to have a dream
It's always just the same nightmare
Baby you're leaving me
I wish that I could wipe it out
I wish I could've made you stay
It doesn't matter anyway

chorus
 
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