Here's the first:

Rowing Round
lyrics by Samantha and Arno


All the sorrow
Keeps coming
But tomorrow,
will they stay?
Wish I could borrow
all your happiness
But here, there is sorrow
Rowing Round

I dream it every night
I see it every day
In front of me
All around me
Just a Black hole
Like where my heart use to be

this life seems meaningless
the road feels endless
pain to much to bear
for every time
stearing in the face

Of

All the sorrow
Keeps coming
But tomorrow,
will they stay?
Wish I could borrow
all your happiness
But here, there is sorrow
Rowing Round

I can't wait
Till someone takes the pain away

I'm dying in the cold
And I can't face this alone
I'm on a road solo
And I can't help it but...

All the sorrow
Keeps coming
But tomorrow,
will they stay?
Wish I could borrow
all your happiness
But here, there is sorrow
Rowing Round
(*chorus may be repeated more than once)


And here's the second:

Even When the Rain is Falling
by Samantha


My life will go on
After it seems to have paused
My heart will one day be strong
And the pain'll be no more

I have to believe
In tomorrows
In the future

I have to hope
That one day I will soar again
And my life finally'll make sense

Chorus:
Even when the rain is falling
I've gotta keep on going
'Cause I know the answers are not that far away.

Even when the rain is falling
I've gotta keep on going...I
'Cause I know the answers are near.


The storm is over
Can't wait till that is real
All my life it's been never ending and I think I'm drowning

Fighting for my life
I don't want give in
It's tempting, but I, I've gotta keep going

I have to hope
That one day I will soar again
And my life finally'll make sense

Chorus:
Even when the rain is falling
I've gotta keep on going
'Cause I know the answers are not that far away.

Even when the rain is falling
I've gotta keep on going...I
'Cause I know the answers are near.


Bridge:
Moving forward
Seems impossible
It's become
A part of my life
And I don't think it'll ever leave

Chorus:
Even when the rain is falling
I've gotta keep on going
'Cause I know the answers are not that far away.

Even when the rain is falling
I've gotta keep on going...I
'Cause I know the answers are near.

(the storm'll be over)

Chorus:
Even when the rain is falling
I've gotta keep on going
'Cause I know the answers are not that far away.

Even when the rain is falling
I've gotta keep on going...I
'Cause I know the answers are near.

My life will go on
After it seems to have paused
My heart will one day be strong
And the pain'll be no more


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Composer's note:

My lyrics so far have had something in common. Most of my lyrics have..... back stories (I don't have a sadistic personality). These lyrics are true life thoughts and feelings, effects and.... (if you read some of my earlier posts, you'll notice that I don't always finish sentences). Anyways....please tell me what you think of my lyrics below.
Please and thank you,
~Sam


So....what do you think?

I was hoping for comments and critique...

still no comments....hmm....

i think its great i love d second one most

Thank you!

I think most of us here would guess you don't have a sadistic personality. I mean poetry and songwriting is all about expression. Anyway both of these songs seem nice. I liked the structure and content of the second song a lot. Is this song about the so called "storms of life"? Life's trials? It sounds like you are using storm as a metaphor for something like that when you say "gotta keep on going". Anyway I like it, has a lot of emotion to it.

Thank you ^

Yeah, it pretty much has to do with those.

It is AWESOME really nice i LOVE it

I wish i could write a song like that

Could you write me a song please

Kamil
Thank you!

I guess so. It might take a while though, I do have 2 songs I wrote that I might be willing to give to someone (not sure if they're uploaded here). Anyways, I'll see what I can do.

Thanks so much
Your the BEST

Can you wite me a love song please

or what ever you have
how long will it take though

i nned it by this monday