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Tell me what you think, Help me finish them?

 
Farley  
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#1 | Posted: 21 Jan 2012 21:25
"Easy Goodbyes"
The siren melodies are all I'm hearing tonight,
Thinking about your dark hair and the way you never care,Nights of sorrow, you were always so shallow

Chorus: Why so easy to let me go?
and so hard to stay close,
you always had a way of keeping me on my toes
Dan Marcus  
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#2 | Posted: 5 Feb 2012 01:58
Chorus:
But i suppose
What nobody knows
Is it's time to let go
Carroll Kiphen  
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#3 | Posted: 6 Feb 2012 06:49
maybe you can use some of this to finish your song?


the siren melodies are all i'm hearing tonight
thinking about your dark hair
and the way you never care.
nights of sorrow
you were so shallow
did my love run too deep?
siren melodies
won't let me fall asleep.

the waves are calling out to me
to go back to your arms
i see the warning signals
i know how you are.
it can only end badly
but sadly i don't care
my fingers want to run through your dark hair.

bridge
nights of sorrow make for easy goodbyes
eyes that never shed a tear
lips that whispered lies
i know it isn't wise
but still i want you here.
catherine lucas  
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#4 | Posted: 7 Feb 2012 02:22
no no i just dont get this
Joana Vaz  
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#5 | Posted: 13 Feb 2012 13:50 | Edited by: Joana Vaz
It'd really help if you told us the story, you know. Like the background.Because we don't really know how to help you. . .
 
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