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#1 | Posted: 16 May 2011 14:00 | Edited by: Salah elkadry
Hi all , what's up ..
I'm new here and I'm so happy cause I found this AMAZING site, I've been looking for something like this, anyway let me introduce myself , I Salah eldeen 20 years old guy from Egypt, I used to listen to American Rock songs, i don't like Egyptian songs actually, most of them have no sensation, just music and rhyme words, but not deep feelings .. so I want to be a songwriter but not here in Egypt, I wish i can live and work in the USA ... it's like a dream.
I'm actually a very good poet, as my friends say, but I want to write songs, I was wondering if I can transform my poems to songs, i've read a lot about song structure and stuff , I have wrote 8 Poems since I started writing (1 and a half month ago) but this is the first "song" I write .. and I want you guys to tell me what to do about it , is it good or i should change something .. just tell me your honest opinion .. there it is..
[url=http://www.songwritingfever.com/material/lyrics/read.php?id=5566][/url]
and also I hope you tell me if some expressions are wrong or don't make sense, cause you know English is my second language, I'm always working on improving it..
Thanks for your time , just wanted to say one more thing, I'm glade to be here , cya ^^
 
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