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Still in love with you lyrics ! need feedback please! :)

 
Hanan  
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#1 | Posted: 12 Nov 2011 11:27
The minutes go by
the days past
and i waiting for you to tell me that im the one
but in my heart, i know you wont
cause you dont do seconds,
its breaking my heart but baby,
i dont care, just as long as you send a glance

coz baby im still in love with youu, still in love with you
and my heart is breaking, into thousands of pieces
and the most funniest thing, is that im still in love with youuu

i dont know whyy, but everytime your harsh,
it just makes me love you moree
and im still waiting for the painn to go
but i know it wont

Because, because, baby, im still in love with youuu, still in love with you
and my heart is breaking, into thousands of pieces
and the most funniest thing, is that im still in love with youu

Wheres my happy fairytale?
where you buy me a promise ringg
and say that you'll always love me till the very end?
coz i want that, i want it soo bad
but ill guess ill just let my heart break
while you go and fool aroundd
and make me believe that im still your friend
no matter what
but i know i cant ,

Because, because, baby, im still in love with youuu, in love with you
and my heart is breaking, into thousands of pieces
and the most funniest thing, is that im still in love with youu

I'm in love with youu
and while you go and fool aroud,
ill be waiting for that phone call,
letting me knoww
that im the onee

Because, because, baby, im still in love with youuu, in love with you
and my heart is breaking, into thousands of pieces
and the most funniest thing, is that im still in love with youu

Because, because, baby, im still in love with youuu, still in love with you
and my heart is breaking, into thousands of pieces
and the most funniest thing, is that im still in love with youuuuuu.
Amber Hunt  
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#2 | Posted: 14 Nov 2011 10:50
well- the people ive talked to for feedback would call that over-metophorical... but they are jerks anyway.
similar style to what i write so i guess i can be more fair
the chorus is really strong- pretty good!
 
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