hi, im looking 4 some feedback on a song im busy writing, it's nearly done. The song is titled 'After The Fall'. I also wanna know if anyone can/could relate to this song, it's about falling out of love and it's a bit of a sad song...
Speechless, held back by my shadow,
how do i let you know?, i guess you'll never know.
Blinded, staring out of the window,
angers filling my soul, it's filling up my soul.
Used to let your name roll off my tongue,
used let it be a word like love,
used to raise me far above.
Now it is a weight for down,
something missing someone's found,
that voice is screaming your name loud.
But now it hurts to hear your name,
changed so fast sunshine to rain,
here, this is now after the fall.
It gets worse by the day,
it gets harder to explain,
and here, this is now after the fall,
after the fall...
Waterfall, flowed into fire,
i guess it went that way, 'twas meant to go that way.
Calling, for someone to answer,
but there's nothing left to say, there's nothing more to say.
As i said im still working on it, i just need feedback, and possibly to let me know if you can/could relate to this song. Thanks much and have a nice day!!!