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Nick Jackson  
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#1 | Posted: 10 Jan 2013 17:47
I need help to make my rap songs better I need added rhymes , word play simlies, and metaphors
morti meni  
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#2 | Posted: 11 Jan 2013 08:49
I'm on one freestlye
by Nick Jackson 2013. Category: Other | Genre: Rap

Rich and wild its the lifestyle that everybody wanna get But nobody gon ever have if you dont have your heart in it Cuz when you spit a lil something ***** You either real or you frontin If all you about is stuntin then nigga you aint gon mount to nothin and get fadeed fast Its all about your future mother ****a **** yo past Cuz i grew up with no mom and now I trap and bust my *** to get every thang that I have and I don't go no where without my gun and my flag my prints ant never on it ***** I keep it in the rag my lyrics sick you'd think I'm c***idy or jagg I take yo baby mom shoppin tell her throw it in the bagg Caught on the flow like I turned bi-polar yo girl love the way that I control her I'm in the whip your girls on my side i turn over In the range rover got the double clip on my side its my4 leaf clover but you you lost ya luck unload reload let Nina buck niggas soakin wet I juss wet em up gmb niggas talkin **** I don't gave a **** bout such and such ya whole team is *****s nigga **** the bunch and Marcus you know that he a cluck dusty bum hasben nigga you suck and i just jumped out the shower and I'm crystal clean now decide the gun without or without the beam brown handle on the heater yea it match the tims you other field niggas wack I am not them and I said in on one yea im boutta role one smoke it till its all done but I gott save it up for the long run I'm gone son yea light em up spray nighas automatically im the baddest g call me your majesty well it has to be nick brezzy the prodigy niggas they be stepping on my block get my glock cocked back they cap get pushed back ***** I'm ruthless ima keep goin till I get poped till I get shot nick brezzy you don't have what I got
niggas is *****s I tried to break the cycle but found out there's to many links automatics for the snitches time for me to Iron out da kinks yea I'm on one

I can't understand your lyric because it was full of hate, I add a little love to it, I hope it be your favorite, & I suggest this below title for your lyric, have a nice time , bye

Time is over for your Snitches:
Chorus:
Rich and freedom's my favorite lifestyle
I wanna get it Cuz I don't have your heart
I don't trap and bust my *** to get every thank
Without my gun and flag I go to my bank

Verse1:
When you tried to break my heart
I don't have what you got
Throw your love and glow in my bag
I keep your dusty bum on my rag

Chorus:
Rich and freedom's my favorite lifestyle
I wanna get it Cuz I don't have your heart
I don't trap and bust my *** to get every thank
Without my gun and flag I go to my bank

Verse2:
I'd think you emerged against me same tom
You tried to control me of all time
My taint was nothing and faded fast
I'm not sorry; I grew up with no mom

Chorus:
Rich and freedom's my favorite lifestyle
I wanna get it Cuz I don't have your heart
I don't trap and bust my *** to get every thank
Without my gun and flag I go to my bank

Verse3:
You can't control all about will happen in your future
I wish I could control you in a whip on my side
I wish I could complete your turn over on my side
I wish I could be as I want to you be

Chorus:
Rich and freedom's my favorite lifestyle
I wanna get it Cuz I don't have your heart
I don't trap and bust my *** to get every thank
Without my gun and flag I go to my bank
"
 
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