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Singer/Musician wanted for this song: "Eyes of Ice, Heart of stone"

 
Faith King  
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#1 | Posted: 31 Jan 2012 09:07
Verse 1

I'm holding on to my heart in a fools paradise
secrets come and go, it's not a surprise
and baby, you're another soul in disguise
Just a bad legend that will never,never die

Verse 2

You're a love en-slaver,I was a dream chaser
one more fool in your game of make believe
so many hearts left broken and left wide open
the tears of sorrow left wet on our sleeves


chorus:

How could you be so cruel, so cold
I never thought I could feel so low
Your eyes of Ice and heart of stone
you Left me here, chilled to the bone


Verse 3

with your eyes of ice and heart of stone
I know I'm the best that you've ever known
I'm gonna fire you up, and make you regret
All the reasons that you said you left

Verse 4

Through the curtain of lies, I saw the light
Baby I'm not letting go without a fight
Deep down I see, it's love that you fear
You've walked before in a trail of tears


chorus:

How could you be so cruel, so cold
I never though I could feel so low
Your eyes of Ice and heart of stone
you Left me here, chilled to the bone
Mahmoud Ibrahim Male  
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#2 | Posted: 13 Feb 2012 21:57
my opinion: these are really good lyrics..especially the verses



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Georgie Stroud  
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#3 | Posted: 18 Feb 2012 15:22
Hello, i would happily sing to this. Love the lyrics. However, i'm not a musician. Contact me if interested. Thanks.
Faith King  
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#4 | Posted: 18 Feb 2012 17:06
Mahmoud Ibrahim
thank you mahmoud, I appreciate your comment..I made a bit of a mistake: the last 2 lines of the chorus needs to be reversed instead of:

Your eye's of ice and heart of stone
You left me here chilled to the bone

should be: You left me here, chilled to the bone
with your eye's of Ice and heart of stone
m. d. kirk  
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#5 | Posted: 18 Feb 2012 23:16
cool
Ashley Owen  
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#6 | Posted: 21 Feb 2012 22:56
I'm not a great singer but my cousin is fantastic and I think this song could sound so powerful and great. Mind if we play with it a bit? We could post it to youtube or something so you can hear it? We would credit you, obviously. She might be able to put it to piano too..
Sue Female  
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#7 | Posted: 11 Mar 2012 10:59
These are great lyrics. Next time I do some composing, I may try to work on music for them.
 
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