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Keshaira Merthie Female  
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#1 | Posted: 26 Apr 2013 17:25
I put 3 of my songs lyrics up on my profile go check them out and read them and give me feedback to what you think...

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morti meni  
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#2 | Posted: 27 Apr 2013 05:45 | Edited by: morti meni
your My Mr. Right( my Mr. wrong)


Verse 1
My Mr. Right, perfect part of my life
I want to be with him for the rest of my life
Yeah, Very soon I will be his wife
That would be happiest season of my life

Chorus:
I'm so in love with my Mr. Right
I think about him day and night
He got me head over heels sprung
And the loving is so strong

Verse 2:
My Mr. Right promised to keep me by his side
He gone make it do what it do tonight
Best believe he always hits it right
keep me on coming back with feeling so flight

Chorus:
I'm so in love with my Mr. Right
I think about him day and night
He got me head over heels sprung
And the loving is so strong

Verse 3:
I love him more and more each day of fall
I get chills just thinking at his beck and call
My liver help to digest fat & I get full of bile
In my tummy butterflies fly when we talk on the mobile

Bridge:
Baby boy I love you with all my heart
You're my Mr. Right
My Mr. Right
My Mr. Right
My Mr. Right
You're every little piece of me
The air that I breathe

Chorus:
I'm so in love with my Mr. Right
I think about him day and night
He got me head over heels sprung
And the loving is so strong
Keshaira Merthie Female  
Forums Member
#3 | Posted: 27 Apr 2013 08:08
thanks morti meni for helping me i love how you switched it up a bit...its very good

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morti meni  
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#4 | Posted: 27 Apr 2013 10:30
1- I chose close to most popular Song Structure:
verse1 / chorus / verse2 / chorus / bridge / verse3/ chorus
2- I chose quatrain (a group of four lines)
'cause all of quatrains have inner song
3- I listen to non vocal song during writing
4- in verses the sound of all the rimes is ascendant
5-verses should have same rhythm & long
6-rewrite, rewrite, it's the key of success
Keshaira Merthie Female  
Forums Member
#5 | Posted: 27 Apr 2013 11:33
that so true morti meni I need to do more learning and stuff when it comes to song writing and stuff

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Ms.Merthie
morti meni  
Forums Member
#6 | Posted: 28 Apr 2013 05:54
You have enough tendency & good taste, be sure you will write so better in future
Now, in crossway of choice I write with four lines & four beats


My(I beat) Mr. (2beat) Right(I beat){4beats}is the perfect(4beats) part of my life (4beats)= (totally=12 beats)

I want to be(4beats) with him for the(4beats) rest of my life(4beats) = (totally=12 beats)

Yeah, Very soon(4beats)Ah, Very soon(4beats) I 'll be his wife (4beats)= (totally=12 beats)

& That would be(4beats) happiest(3beats) season of my life(5beats)= (totally=12 beats)
Matthew Hickman Male  
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#7 | Posted: 28 Apr 2013 06:14
It's nice to have helpful people on the forums.

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Keshaira Merthie Female  
Forums Member
#8 | Posted: 28 Apr 2013 11:35
Thats cool morti meni and i appreciate you for helping me with that and I'm going to always carry that with me and remember that. Thanks for saying all that good stuff about me as well. Make sure to always keep in touch with me please....

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Keshaira Merthie Female  
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#9 | Posted: 28 Apr 2013 11:36
@Matthew Hickman that is so true and morti meni was the only one willing to help me out and I think he should be rewarded for that...

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morti meni  
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#10 | Posted: 29 Apr 2013 06:14
As ever, me & Persian-English dictionary will be your helper
With or without me through love and perseverance you can fade every impossible
 
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