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lyric feed back please

 
gareth  
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#1 | Posted: 2 Nov 2011 02:06 | Edited by: gareth
hey guys, i've got the music for this song but need feedback on these COPYWRITED lyrics:

hit the deck....
shots fired, but not repeating
make your heart skip a beat,
make sure its still beating

skin grows back
skin grows back
cuts will heal, a scar for fearless
skin grows back

drop in.....
carve yourself a brand new meaning
make your heart skip a beat,
make sure its still beating

skin grows back
skin grows back
cuts will heal, a scar for fearless
skin grows back
 
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