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Nour  
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#1 | Posted: 23 Jan 2013 06:57
Hello! So I'd like to know what you guys think of these lyrics, and what changes I could make to improve them!

KARMA KNOWS

I used to say have no regrets
That was way before you happened
I know I am the one to blame
But Karma knows what you did


Lately things have been hard
Made the worst choice of my life
Wish I could go back in time
And change what happened that night
Your friends they judged me
They tried to bring me down
I couldn't stand them
But it's all over now

You think you know me
You took advantage of
The fact I was weak and hurt enough to fall in your hands
Hate is a strong word
Might be just the right one for you
And I promise
You won't get away with it


I used to say have no regrets
That was way before you happened
I know I am the one to blame
But Karma knows, she knows what you did
I used to say have no regrets
That was way before you happened
I know I am the one to blame
But Karma knows what you did


You made it happen so fast
Didn't have time to think about
What made it look right
Cause I've been trying to figure out
You came and destroyed
The thing that counts the most
You took his place and
Made me think it was okay

You think you know me
You took advantage of
The fact I was weak and hurt enough to fall in your hands
Hate is a strong word
Might be just the right one for you
And I promise
You won't get away with it


I used to say have no regrets
That was way before you happened
I know I am the one to blame
But Karma knows, she knows what you did
I used to say have no regrets
That was way before you happened
I know I am the one to blame
But Karma knows what you did


I tried to tell you how I feel
How I never saw you coming
I can't believe I was that na´ve
I should've known who to believe
Now you don't even exist to me
We never were, we will never be
When I look back all I can see
Is just a blur, you're history

You think you know me
You took advantage of
The fact I was weak and hurt enough to fall in your hands
Hate is a strong word
Might be just the right one for you
And I promise
You won't get away with it


I used to say have no regrets
That was way before you happened
I know I am the one to blame
But Karma knows, she knows what you did
I used to say have no regrets
That was way before you happened
I know I am the one to blame
But Karma knows what you did
She even knows where you live!
morti meni  
Forums Member
#2 | Posted: 23 Jan 2013 08:55 | Edited by: morti meni
I'd used to say have no regret
That was my way before you happened
who is to blame for our neglect?
just Karma knows, though she is secret


while you gave me the knee
You think you know me
When I look back all I can see
just a blur, you're history
I tried to tell you how I feel
How I never saw you coming
I can't believe I was that na´ve
I should've known who to believe
Now you don't even exist to me
We never were, we will never be
yeah, Karma knows what you did
She even knows where you live!


it will be discover ,she used to detect
can't you forget, the word of regret
feel Karma, though she is secret
we're to blame for our neglect
 
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