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I'm completely new to this but do you reckon some of you could have a quick look please?
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I'm completely new to this but do you reckon some of you could have a quick look please?

 
Ben Whitton  
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#1 | Posted: 14 Nov 2012 17:06
I was thinking of doing these like spoken word style maybe over dnb, dunno if thats the kind of thing people go for on here, but here goes....


You're witnessing poetry in moition
Rhymes deep like the Atlantic Ocean
Keep changin my face
Got dat Polyjuice potion
Spittin fire you're gonna need that after sun lotion
Gonna slip through your guard like a trojan
My concentration's so high I'm gonna cause corrosion
Get it? My concentration's so high I'm gonna cause corrosion
To the extent of a... FUUUCKING MAAASSIVE EXPLOSION.

The beats and me, we got chemistry,
Whereas others make it their enemy
They say they're spitting
I say it's a felony they're committing
I'm something new I'm something different like that Sense MC
Difference is the flow's gotta hold of me
Writing down these rhymes is intellectual release
My bars are slicker than Danny from Grease
See words can be used to spread war and peace
You gotta understand
Your rhymes gonna leave you out in the cold boy,
Cos here I am referencing Leo Tolstoyyyyy.

Here we are back to the present
I'm wielding the sickle AND the crescent
Na I ain't Turkish but I could boss that FEZtival
See with words you gotta caress em all
Learn the syllables and when to STRESS em all
We talkin about my rhymes? Someone blessed em all
Been tryna find out who but no-one's confessed it all.

Putting the words in the right location location location
It's like a channel 4 communication
Adding removing parts like operation
This ain't no game it's a full time occupation
Firing off rhymes like a bullet train
But I ain't stoppin at this station
I'm the doctor of this genre
I'll put you on medication
Once I'm done with ya
You'll need indefinite vacation.
 
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