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I'll take you down(Hard Rock)/Feedback would be apperciated
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I'll take you down(Hard Rock)/Feedback would be apperciated

 
Branden Floyd  
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#1 | Posted: 10 Aug 2014 01:30 | Edited by: Branden Floyd
Here's my second song titled "I'll take you down"
The song is about someone finally standing up to someone who has pushed them around for a long time. For this song i feel like a hard rock tone with a fast beat would fit. Something like you would hear from system of a down or maybe Disturbed.
I would love some feeback on this one as well

(Verse 1)
You think your tough,
You think you have it all.
But in the end your just a sad excuse for a human.
A waste of breath, A waste of life
And i'll make sure that it ends tonight.

(Pre-Chorus)
You think your tough, We'll just see.
Come here and stand right in front of me.
I'll take you down, As fast as light.
I'll make sure you'll learn your lesson tonight
I'll take you down

(Chrous)
Tonight i'm going to end it all.
I wont let you hold me back anymore
You've pushed me towards the edge and now theres no turning back
You started this war and im ending.
You cant away, Not anymore So stop talking before i take you down.


(Verse 2)
Ive had enough of your ****
So many years of taking it
But the beast has been unleashed and now i'll make sure that you pay.
There's no where to run, No where to hide.
So face me and get ready for a fight.

(Chrous)
Tonight i'm going to end it all.
I wont let you hold me back anymore
You've pushed me towards the edge and now theres no turning back
You started this war and im ending.
You cant away, Not anymore So stop talking before i take you down.


Bridge:
I've been wating so long for this.
And now you'll finally pay for it.
This is it, No turning back.
So stop talking and bring it on

Copyright: Branden Floyd 2014
 
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