hi guys, i've finished a 1st and a 2nd verse, i hope u all like it and it's all about that day i spent alone hanging out with my secret crush who i thought i got over... Enjoy!
Danica De Jongh:
You looked so perfect that day,
and you pulled me in once more,
i thought that i put out that flame,
and i thought that i shut that door,
You were the first thing i saw
and the last thing i thought of
the only other thing there
was my nervous beating heart
You put the music so loud,
it felt like the beat took over,
we were talking bout how,
we like the words to express deep emotion.
You were driving me crazy,
in all the best of ways,
with the sun shining so freely,
and my heart beat in such a race.
We were talking about,
why my back was sore,
and you said straight up out loud,
it might have been when i fell of my skateboard.
Just to see that smile on your face,
i would give anything,
eventhough you opened that gate,
i think i purposely left an opening.
It's a working progress, i still have to make up another part seeing that im turning it into a poem instead of a song but i typed it that way so that it's easier to see what i might roughly do to it...