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sdelgo  
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#1 | Posted: 14 Nov 2011 15:43
I don't know if it's just me or if some other musicians only fell this way as well.
When lyricists post lyrics on this site and say "x" needs music... that seems a bit vague for any musician to try figure out let alone get a feel for.
I've collabed with a few people on this site in the past. Some people sent lyrics with a melody sketch (works well) some sent a roughed out music track (works extremely well) and some just sent lyrics in hopes of me coming up with a tune for the lyrics (doesn't work so well)
I don't know what the other musicians on this site feel about this... but for me, I'd be willing to work with a lot more lyricists if there was a little more to work from in terms of how they'd like their lyrics to sound (genre, melody, vibe)
I've worked with and have employed numerous song writers over the years and the most successful writers pen a set of lyrics with a simple melodic tune attached to it and it goes a lot further and a lot quicker to becoming a completed song.
I don't mean to offend anyone here AND I don't know what the success rate is of come of the collabs that have taken place here on this site. I guess it's just my perspective.

Steve
Carroll Kiphen  
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#2 | Posted: 15 Nov 2011 04:17
Would love to include a melody but I have no knowledge of music . I can fully understand your frustration but it's frustrating from my side too. I personally do not care for the most part what melody or genre the musician chooses. I fully expect that people have different interpretations for lyrics that they read. I would think that although more difficult that it would give the musician more of a feeling of ownership in the song.
Blu Kola  
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#3 | Posted: 15 Nov 2011 05:10
I'm sure I'm not half the musician as you are Steve but I agree 100% . There are free recording and DAW software programs online . FREE ! If you can create a simple drum pattern to sing your lyrics to it would go a looooonnnngggg way viola! There is your rough draft melody...I know majority of the members on the site write lyrics but think it would make for a better SWF community if we were doing more to turn our lyrics into full songs. I don't want to get flagged for spam , so if anyone is interested in the LEGAL free software just pm me....

Thanks for your post Steve!
Let's make some music.....
The Concerned Conservative  
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#4 | Posted: 15 Nov 2011 14:57
I use audacity and LMMS both free programs
Shaun Nichols  
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#5 | Posted: 15 Nov 2011 23:23
Steve,

I can understand exactly where you are coming from. I have only been here a very short time ( a few hours) and I can tell that most people here are very new to songwriting themselves. They are looking for guidance and basically are only able to put words on paper. Not saying all are like this but a large majority are. People get excited when they are able to put a "song" on paper and hope that someone else can work the magic for them. It would appear that when the person was in the process of writing the song, they must have had some sort of beat, tune, or melody in mind when writing it. Even though the person might not be able to sing it well, they might even consider humming or attempting to sing in order to give the musician an idea of what they are looking for. On the other hand, I have seen many people know exactly what they are looking for but are very curious to see if others are able to come up with something totally different. For instance, If I write a country song with a country vibe to it and I present it to you with that same feel, chances are you will put a country sound to it. But, if I don't send anything but the words and you turn it into a rock song, then it has a whole new sound and perspective. The later choice makes it way more difficult for the musician and most of the time the musician may even pass on a song where the writer has no idea what direction he/or she wants to go with the song.

Good topic.
Ameirah Female  
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#6 | Posted: 16 Nov 2011 04:05
Steve, do you compose all genres? I find that people that learn toward one genre usually see all lyrics in THAT genre. Maybe because you are so versatile you have are having trouble ;)

I think that there are generally two categories to the lyrics posted here which I have noticed. Lyrics which are written with a genre in mind (this is a RAP song/ METAL song...)
And ones which aren't, and could go many ways.

Maybe you should look at it as an advantage, that you have a blank canvas to work on?

I was also very confused when lyricists would say, really we have no idea how this should sound. Then I realized that some songs really could go either way, like some famous remakes like Sweet Dreams, or You've got the love by Florence and the machine.

There were lyrics posted by Carol I think, and I saw them and I was like, this should should sound like THIS!

Just trying to help, maybe if you take it as a good thing it wont annoy you.

On the other hand, lyricists which "have no idea" what they want, but seem not to like anything you come up with...well that's a different story.

Which lyrics are confusing you? Maybe we could help!

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sdelgo  
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#7 | Posted: 16 Nov 2011 05:53
To all,
I apologize for the mis-spelled words etc.. in my original post. I wrote that from my iPhone between recording sessions, I guess it was a bit rushed.

Carroll,
It has been my experience that lyricists do not need to have a whole lot of musical knowledge, that can be left to the musician. However, if a writer submits a general AABA form song with a chorus, intro, outro etc... AND just adds a brief description of the melody (sad, happy, angry or whatever...) it can go a long way in a faster completion of the collab. A real helpful practice for musicians from a lyricist's standpoint is submitting a verse with a melodic idea either hummed out, played on an instrument or just sung by the writer. The singing doesn't have to be perfect but it'll give the musician an idea and a starting point and it will also lessen the frustration of having to come up with a melody/chorus/hook etc...If you give a musician a set of notes that go with a few lines of your written song the musician SHOULD be able to take that and expound on the melodic part as well as develop a supporting chordal structure which leads to the development of a chorus and bridge etc... All that from a few guide notes.
Here is a quick exapmle: "The scent of love lingers forever" take that line and break the individual syllables down into notes that you like: The (C) scent (E) of love (G) lingers (E)
for (E) ever (G) Now if this is sent to a musician he/she can basically see the the notes (C,E,G) you picked are in a C major signature and they can start from there in coming up with an extended melody, chorus and overall feeling for the song. If you want me to explain more, I'd love to help you out-just pm me.

Blu Kola,
i agree with your comment about the free software available online, it is indeed everywhere on the net. you can get anything from DAW (digital audio workstations) to virtual instruments for free just to use as a guide to musical lyric writing.

Shaun,

You're statement: "It would appear that when the person was in the process of writing the song, they must have had some sort of beat, tune, or melody in mind when writing it. Even though the person might not be able to sing it well, they might even consider humming or attempting to sing in order to give the musician an idea of what they are looking for." Is exactly what I'm trying to get at, you nailed it!
I can tell you this: When I have a group of musicians in one of our studios and I bring them some lyrics and there is no guide as far as notes or ideas from the writer it's a huge turn off and the lyrics get flipped to the back of the binder and might not get re-visted ever.
When I come in with a set of lyrics with some sort of guide (melody notes or the writer humming etc...) it's almost an automatic "jam session" and that is where the song starts it's musical birth.
I usually set up a room mic when I'm in the studio with some musicians just to capture by the off chance they start jamming and it's something good we can go back to hear how it was played... but you should hear how quickly a song can be developed (roughly) once the muscians have direction... be it a few notes or a drum pattern or some humming.

Ameirah,
I'm not annoyed by any means. I was just trying to pass on some insight into the writer/musician relationship as I see it from my point of view inside the music business.
There really is no specific post or person I'm referring to it's just that a lot of the posts here are "x needs music" and I can say that without some direction it'll take a musician a lot longer to come up with something that matches what the writer might have in mind for the song if anything at all.
As for me, I'm really not confused by any lyrical content here and you're right a song can sound great across all genres. I really think the "blank canvas" works well with a writer AND musician sitting at a piano fleshing out a tune rather than "please add music to these lyrics" and I'm speaking strictly from a turn-a-round time for completed songs for record labels and radio placements. That's where my main focus is. If it's making a song and collabbing for a hobby then that's another story.

Steve
Allen Clifford Bilodeau  
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#8 | Posted: 18 Nov 2011 16:42
hello steve

One of the guilty ones ...lol....I can certainly see where you are coming from....my problem is that I'm almost computer illiterate, and live in an isolated area where there is just dial-up....I just recently, after owning a computer for ten years, figured out i had a sound recorder...and could send voice recordings...If you see anything interesting words on my profile, you can sure get a recording passed on of my melody....anytime.
thanks
Allen
Carroll Kiphen  
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#9 | Posted: 19 Nov 2011 06:59
I didn't know the computer could record! What do I do to bring up the recorder. My computer is new.
Allen Clifford Bilodeau  
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#10 | Posted: 19 Nov 2011 14:22
Hello Carroll
I don't know for sure about your computer, but on mine its a simple matter of bringing up all the programs, by hitting the round ball down in left corner, and look in all programs for sound recorder...then its just a matter of start and stop....sending it out by email still gets me confused sometimes though...I'm learning how to copy and paste. I am quite sure that there are so many more people on here that can help you better...ps read some of your lyrics and like the way you have with words
Carroll Kiphen  
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#11 | Posted: 19 Nov 2011 14:29
Thanks I appreciate it.
The Concerned Conservative  
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#12 | Posted: 20 Nov 2011 10:00
Try look for the free programs Audacity and LMMS. They are good for recording and make sure you get a basic microphone or if you want to get fancy a preamp. LMMS is good for making beats.
Carroll Kiphen  
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#13 | Posted: 20 Nov 2011 10:23
thanks
sdelgo  
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#14 | Posted: 20 Nov 2011 11:45
Seems like Audacity is a favorite here...Here's a brief tutorial how to use it etc...

Steve
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X1lPvBY_ri8
Blu Kola  
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#15 | Posted: 22 Nov 2011 05:10
@the concerned conservative those programs were exactly what I was speaking of...
 
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