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Fragile Heart

 
Samantha  
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#1 | Posted: 13 Aug 2011 05:59
What do you think?


Fragile Heart
By Samantha ˆ

It's like I can almost imagine
Looking inside out
Feeling all blocked out
Of your life

Never tried it out,
But I know within
I may lose my chance to your heart

What would it be like
To hear your voice,
Feel your touch to know you care too

Chorus:
Oooh,
Wish you knew me
Wish I could tell you
That
Oooh,
It's a first-sight affair
I've loved you from the start
But I can't tell you, because my heart's too fragile


From the day I saw you
I knew my heart was lost
And it found a way to you

The day you see me
I wish I could have your heart too
If it's possible

What would it be like
To hear you say you love me
Hear you say you care...

Chorus:
Oooh,
Wish you knew me
Wish I could tell you
That
Oooh,
It's a first-sight affair
I've loved you from the start
But I can't tell you, because my heart's too fragile



Bridge:
My heart is fragile
I don't want it to break
But it's you I want, Miss
But would you want me too...

Chorus:
Oooh,
Wish you knew me
Wish I could tell you
That
Oooh,
It's a first-sight affair
I've loved you from the start
But I can't tell you
(repeat)
'Cause my heart is fragile.

(c) 2011
OW # 19866
Samantha  
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#2 | Posted: 15 Aug 2011 02:42
The song's been edited a bit now (not changed it on here yet), but please...tell...me...what do you think?
Jacob  
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#3 | Posted: 24 Aug 2011 12:28
the words are nice, and the message is strong! I wish that it rhymed, but that's okay because it doesn't necessarily have to. Great job (:
Samantha  
Forums Member
#4 | Posted: 24 Aug 2011 12:52
Thanks
Elijah James  
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#5 | Posted: 27 Aug 2011 18:15
Its beautiful. From my experience things may end up badly but at least you won't explode inside from not telling the other person how you feel. But I understand the thoughts and feelings of this song. Great write. Keep it up Samantha
Samantha  
Forums Member
#6 | Posted: 27 Nov 2011 02:10
Thanks, Elijah
 
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