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Daniel Sinclair  
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#1 | Posted: 30 Nov 2011 13:43
Hey, I'm new... This is my first post and it's a small song i wrote not that long ago.


deep in my mind theres something cast away,
past the horizon and into the great plains,
blessed with shame and a case of hate,
as i'm placed and my knuckles tighten that they nearly break,
with the reflection of my face full of distaste,
i fall on my knees and see chased dreams drift away,
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i hear the sound of my steps as i count my last,
a distant dawn aproaches with a shadow cast,
i set my way to my heart with the task,
i look up and wonder if there really is a god to ask,
glass shatters from above, i know whats begun,
I don't take the fear, i walk with dignity in my blood,
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my eyes darken as i make my bed,
i stand tall before i fall and think it all through again,
the night fall comes early as i don't breathe,
my understanding has gone, taken it's leave,
James T. Ramos  
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#2 | Posted: 30 Nov 2011 15:37
What do you think about my stuff?
 
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