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JAKE.  
Forums Member
#1 | Posted: 19 May 2014 20:34
I've been on hiatus with school and work and everything, but I'm getting back to my songwriting and here is one I whipped up today. I'm a little rusty, but let me know what you guys think.

You've got my heart charged
You've got my heart charged, yeah

Simple minded type of creature
Yeah that's what you do
You get me all charged up,
then you leave me boo
But I can't take it anymore
I'm at an end, yeah

Lovesick puppy dog
I always follow you
Then I end up all alone,
don't know what to do
I can't take it anymore
I'm at my wits end
An end

Chorus:
You've got my heart charged
full battery
You send a hot charge
running straight through me
So baby please come back and run me dry
I'm all charged up tonight

Peepshow to your love
Babe you're such a tease
You get me all worked up
& then you leave with ease
But I can't take it anymore
I'm at an end, yeah

Stop denying it
Stop denying the love
I know you're feeling it
I know you're all charged up
Baby let the walls down
& let me in
Let me in

Chorus

(x2):
You've got my heart charged
You've got my heart charged
You've got my heart charged
You've got my heart charged, yeah

Chorus
Tracy Hutchison  
Forums Member
#2 | Posted: 20 May 2014 11:11
I like it
JAKE.  
Forums Member
#3 | Posted: 20 May 2014 13:46
Thank you Tracy! That means a lot.
 
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