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The Battle Begins - Comment Please

 
The Concerned Conservative  
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#1 | Posted: 5 Nov 2011 19:01
The Battle Begins

VERSE 1:
One of these days you will have to work
In order make a living
Better get ready and learn something
Before you end up screaming

CHORUS:
Because the battle begins in your life
And you need to equip yourself good
This life is very hard you will see
You should really start knocking on wood

VERSE 2:
Some people can put you in lots of danger
They are not to be trusted
You need to push back in order to survive
Before you end up busted

BRIDGE:
What is this world coming to?
Oh what is this world coming to???

VERSE 3:
Everything you say and everything you do
can be used against you
We all need to be kept accountable
That is the golden rule
Young Chi-con, Rapper, New World Legendz  
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#2 | Posted: 8 Nov 2011 06:59
add more to the verse and develop a smoother flow.
The Concerned Conservative  
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#3 | Posted: 10 Nov 2011 18:23
Which verse and how many lines would you say?
 
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